yes. its official. i somehow wandered into a virtual jewish retirement center whilst searching for a poets society. the reviews are in and dear god do these people not have any good idea what writing is all about. ( not like i do, but i write for me. not for "abe" down in pawtucket. i could give a shit less what "abe" thinks. )
ive seen better dribble on the rags at the check out counter. limp pickles have more talent than most of these hacks.
anyway...

review number uno-4 stars out of 5

Prince Valiant would be enough for me... but I'm older than you are Lady, you'd better watch what you wish for ;) ... Interesting, fun...

yes, thats a man older than retired giving me the emoticon for winking. there is an elder statesmen e-flirting with myrna. can you imagine? E-flirting people! he did however say that the poem ran on a bit too long. my response-
too long? what do you know about too long?HA!

review number zwei- 4 out of 5 stars
This is a good poem with a different style which is one of the beauty of free verse. basically well written.
what didnt they like? ...nothing.
what didnt i like? their butchery of the language.

in myrna's poem i wrote "spelunk me!"
didnt anyone catch that and think...hmmm. and on top of that the top prize for reviews this month is a camcorder, a shitty one at that, so its not like these people are reviewing this shit for the haul. oh no, theyre doing it out of love for terrible poetry. more to come.
and now, its time for me to take my yorkie for a walk.